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Highlander Charter School is now part of EnrollRI, the unified enrollment platform from the RI Department of Education. Families can easily discover, compare, and apply to charter schools in one place.
🎯 Apply Now
Submit your application to Highlander’s 2024–2025 enrollment lottery using the EnrollRI Common Application.
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Deadline: Thursday, March 14, 2024 at 5:00 PM
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Lottery Date: Monday, April 1, 2024
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Late applications will be added to the waitlist after the lottery.
📝 When Applying
Be sure to select the correct school:
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Highlander Elementary Charter School (Grades PreK–6)
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Highlander Secondary Charter School (Grades 7–12)
✅ You’ll need a valid email address and mobile number. Set up a free Gmail account if needed.
📌 Important Notes
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If your child is on the 2023–2024 waitlist, you must reapply for 2024–2025 via EnrollRI.
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Pre-K applicants must be 4 years old by September 1, 2024.
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Kindergarten applicants must be 5 years old by the same date.
🎟️ Admission Process
Highlander is a nonselective public charter school, open to all Rhode Island residents. Enrollment is determined by random lottery:
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75% of seats are reserved for Providence residents, and 25% for other RI cities.
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Accepted families will receive a confirmation packet by mail, with 15 business days to submit required documents:
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Confirmation Form
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Birth Certificate
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Proof of Address
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Authorization for school records
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IEP/504 (if applicable)
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⚠️ If documents are not received by the deadline, the spot may be offered to the next student on the waitlist.
🎯 Preference Policies
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Siblings of current students receive priority.
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Children of full-time Highlander employees who reside in RI also receive preference.
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If multiple eligible applicants exist, a separate preference lottery is held.
📤 Reapplying After Leaving
If a student leaves Highlander and wishes to return, they must reapply and go through the standard lottery process.
📞 Questions?
Contact us at 401-247-3585 ext. 202 or 208 or email schoollife@hc.school.

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